Many people believe that healthy eating and importance of healthy food should be taught in schools other shit that parents should take their kid about healthy food and that please call somebody views and give your opinion with relevant example.
In this present era, healthy food and diet are debatable topics for discussion. While, some people feel that school should teach about the healthy habit of eating, the rest of people not support this statement. They believe that parents will provide knowledge of healthy food. This essay will explain why people think this way and also gives my opinion in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with, Plenty of reasons which indicated schools should teach about the healthy food. To begin with, If academic institutes introduced healthy food subject, then the students can understand vitamins. And, That comes from which food item. For example, since the USA school's added new subject of eating habit, the students have valuable information about vitamins. It is the reason behind that thinking.
On the other hand, numbers of reasons which say parents are the best instructor for healthy food. Firstly, parents provide healthy food to their children and teach the benefits of that so, they can understand properly. Secondly, schools have lots of academic-work therefore, parents should take responsibility for the children healthy’s. For instance, Indian parents are extremely sensitives to children eating habit. And, students get knowledge from their parent. That creates an impact on the country's lifestyle.
To conclude, although schools can teach about healthy food to their student, parents can teach effectively. That generates reasonable effects on their lifestyle. In my opinion, I strongly believe that parents should direct their children to healthy food.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5041322314 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54407228757 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537190082645 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4831465276 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4444444444 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417897853988 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140185931832 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100266292402 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280461220482 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333330166598 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5041322314 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54407228757 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537190082645 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4831465276 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4444444444 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417897853988 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140185931832 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100266292402 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280461220482 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333330166598 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.