It is important for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as squares and parks. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In this day and age, as urban areas are becoming more overcrowded, some people think that it is vitally necessary for residents to construct large public places such as parks or squares. In my opinion, I completely agree with this point of view.
On the one hand, public spaces bring more benefits for residents from the health aspect. Clearly, people who live in urban areas might have opportunities to workout such as walking or exercising. The research shows that in neighborhoods where people walk less, they are more likely overweight. Besides, by playing outdoor games, the children might be restricted to spending too much time video games, thereby becoming more active and mitigating mental health issues. Also, it is a wonderful place to help adults to release the stressful by wandering around with their friends or sightseeing.
On the other hand, it is crucial for cities economy from public outdoor spaces. First, create good public spaces is the key to city economic progression. For instance, the invertor might attract by beautiful parks, gardens or availability public areas. With the investment from entrepreneurs might create more job for the local workforce and the huge boost for the city economy. In addition, by creating a landmark through constructing the public areas might bring more visitor to cities. For examples, the Singapore garden park has attracted thousands of traveler a day, with a huge exchange for the treasury of government.
In conclusion, It is crucial to constructing large public spaces for urban areas. There are many benefits that not only from the health aspect but also economy perspective.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'construct'?
Suggestion: construct
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22641509434 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7112728295 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3500929968 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24558947279 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873148132457 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581436603697 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151484225287 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508496742985 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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