It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and
their personal lives.
Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Without risk no one can progress. Actually, risk plays a crucial role in both professional and personal people’s lives. In my opinion, although taking risk has lots of benefit it has many intense harmful.
On the one hand, every person should take risk in his/her personal life. A person who has not courage to do risk is very weak and coward because taking risks gives lots of opportunities to improve quality of people life and their career. For example, when a person invests on super expensive apartment in fact, he equivalents all of his/her life but if he/she can sell it gain much money and can extremely better his/her life. In professional aspects not only he/she learn how to trade and business boy others but also this cause improve communication skills.
On the other hand, when people fail in their risks depend on level of risk its harmful can has effect on lives people. It makes people have become depressed or even some times heart attack. If people do risk without any plan they always fail. For example, someone who allocate all of his/her money in gambling surely loss of them. Not only does loss all money but also loss every thing who has in life such as wife, house, car and etc. hence, although take risks has numerous advantages always should be careful to do it sensible.
In conclusion, people of a society always like to take risks because its benefits are a lot of but they should notice this point that it might harmful effects if fail.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 373, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gains'?
Suggestion: gains
... his/her life but if he/she can sell it gain much money and can extremely better his...
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Line 2, column 468, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'learns'.
Suggestion: learns
...In professional aspects not only he/she learn how to trade and business boy others bu...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'times'' or 'time's'?
Suggestion: times'; time's
...ople have become depressed or even some times heart attack. If people do risk without...
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Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ressed or even some times heart attack. If people do risk without any plan they al...
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Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ho has in life such as wife, house, car and etc. hence, although take risks has numerous...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, so, even so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69111969112 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32171251043 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563706563707 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5946074179 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7857142857 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349551096963 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127022880851 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932520122515 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212070645732 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554641670249 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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