Do the governments give support to the other people of other countries or to their own country? It is commonly argued that the government should assist to their natives as compared to the other people, and I support this view because of raising population, un-employment along with lack of education in many areas.
The primitive factor to support my view is dramatically increased population. Owing to the fact that, if the number of people is surged then there is need of more space, food, shelter as they are the builders of the nation and the entire nation progress is based on their people. Therefore, it is the onus on government to support them financially and provide all the facilities, so there should be a good lifestyle for them. To cite an example, a survey conducted by Indian Development Society in India, in 2012, revealed that 75% people were living below poverty line and earns a little even to buy food for them in Uttar Pradesh.
Furthermore, the other crucial factor is lack of workplaces to give job to youngsters. This is because, the major companies are investing their money in the developed countries instead of their own countries which are under development, in this way the new generation is facing more competition to get a job, or some faced different situations related to the corruption; resultantly, the future of country is gradually goes in darkness due to less work industries and factories, for the enhanced future of the country, government required to begin new projects and job opportunities mostly in the rural areas.
Apart from this, education is the fundamental need of everyone. Since there are lack of schools and universities, people are not able to get the education. Even schools and libraries are far more from their villages as well as no transportation systems to reach at those places. Additonally, fees of education is high. Government can spend some funds on the free education, so that every person become educated and become able to earn their own bread and butter. Not only this is assisted them in a right direction towards success, but also the crime rates will be fell down. For instance, had my aunt’s maid, never thought to give education to his son, she could not have made a better career for his ward.
In conclusion, owing to the high population, devoid of job opportunities and definitely the requirement of education is crucial for the entire country growth, I am convinced that given argument is logically sound.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2080.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95238095238 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81093185056 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552380952381 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.217028778 49.4020404114 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19925577034 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601402168495 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728320042602 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106406323202 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605064404113 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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