The food industry is currently reaching to the new level, today, the imported food is the top favoured choice. However, some people think that eating it will bring back some drawbacks. Do you think advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
In this era, due to the globalization, where all world has shrunk into a global village, so the imported food items from the other parts of the globe are rapidly gaining popularity; however, there are some folks who opine that it is casting a profound impact on the health of masses. This essay shall first demonstrate that imported food has diversity which is the biggest merit of this, followed by an analysis of how the primary demerit, namely food packaging for long time, is not valid.
To commence, while considering the imperative benefits of imported vegetables and fruits, first and the foremost is that detizens take the advantage of eating a variety of food items. To explicate, since rarely are few dwellers who does not want to try foreigner food, there is plethora of fruits and nuts that are shipped in from abroad. Kiwi fruit, for instance, is imported in India from Newzealand specifically for its vast health benefits. Therefore, in this way, the import and export relations become stronger in the distinguish nations, and their folks enjoy eating numerous food items.
In spite of this, there are certain drawbacks of this given statement. Primarily, the utmost limitation is packaging for long time. To elaborate, to exemplify, merely do some foods which delivered sans packing in plastic wrappers, mainly to keep the fruit or vegetable in the same way as it is earlier with the help of preservatives which impact on the stomach of the consumer; however, it is not considered harmful to the health of a person, and there is no any significant research occurred which proved this. Henceforth, in this way food is served clean and fresh to the consumers. To exemplify, a research conducted by university of Mississauga, Ontario in year 2020, experimented on the 100 netizens from GEN Z who consume packaged imported food, revealed that 85% did not have any health related problem that ate such food on regular basis.
To recapitulate, having pondered over a great deal of thoughts and deliberation, it could be concluded that its benefits are far more as compare to its shortcomings. Although long time packing of foreigner food is not fresh as the native food, there are not any major issues related to this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 520, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...and export relations become stronger in the distinguish nations, and their folks enjoy eating n...
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Line 3, column 456, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...to the health of a person, and there is no any significant research occurred which...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...oncluded that its benefits are far more as compare to its shortcomings. Although l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in spite of, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95466666667 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7302421545 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.8167760189 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.923076923 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8461538462 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176744037496 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648139279779 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305289616795 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113335463925 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151585041063 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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