It is inevitable that as technology develops so traditional cultures must be lost. Technology and tradition are incompatible - you cannot have both together.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
In this contemporary era, technology is progressing at an exponential pace; thus, it is revolutionising every aspects of our life. It is irrefutable that technology is one of the reason behind the drastic destruction of our traditional culture. However, in my perspective, technology and our tradition go well together.
Firstly, traditional musical instruments such as banjos are being replaced by guitars, pianos and so on. The younger generation prefers western musics more than our classical music. Apart from this, the numbers of traditional performances organised have also been reduced due to the invention of stupid box which always broadcast numerous TV shows and serials, creating less importance to the traditional performances.
Consequently, computer games are becoming ubiquitous. Innovation of such video games are eradicating the existence of traditional games. Adolescents are becoming more addicted towards the video games that they are oblivious to the beauty of traditional games. According to them, these are old-fashioned and boring games. An axiom for this issue is to constitute traditional games into video games so that youngsters will get exposure to it.
In addition, nowadays people prefer to live in modern apartments which have enormous facilities and comforts. So usages of traditional houses have become comparatively less. The concept of nuclear family is enhancing day by day. Flats offering much secure environment. Apart from this, apartments help to reduce vicissitudes of our life. To have an ancient touch, one can include conventional concepts and furniture while building the house.
To recapitulate, the advancement of technology has indeed abraded some traditions abruptly; nevertheless, both of them are not mutually incompatible. Increment in technology does not mean throttle the culture to death. We can preserve our traditions which reflect of our origins but at the same time manage to develop our country with full utilisation of technology as it could rejuvenate traditions which is an imperative part of human civilisation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, apart from, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62738853503 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20491206071 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62101910828 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.2381804813 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.35 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253138027519 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714818410729 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573377427036 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137287140392 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512018301659 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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