It is the job of governments and companies to deal with the huge environmental problems which we face. Individuals on their own can do little or nothing’. What is your opinion about this statement?
Some people are of the opinion that tackling environmental problems facing humans is the responsibility of governments and companies, while others claim that in addition to these two forces, individuals could contribute to protecting the environment. From my point of view, all of the society should join hands in order to successfully remedy the situation.
Governments and companies play a pivotal role in solving environmental issues. Gases released from factories such as carbon dioxide or methane are one of the main culprits of the severely contaminated air in several cities and megacities in the world. If these firms could control the number of emissions released during the process of producing their products, the air quality would improve significantly. Local authorities could introduce more laws and impose stricter penalties for any companies and individuals that do harm to the environment. In addition, governments could allocate more resources to scientific researches so that scientists could gain insights into environmental problems and discover solutions to them.
Not only governments and factories, but individuals could also make a great contribution to preserving and protecting the earth from being more polluted in many ways. People can adopt environmentally-friendly habits such as replacing plastic bags with paper bags as the plastic ones not only contaminate the soil but also cause marine pollution. Citizens in big cities could commute by public transport in replace of private vehicles. Consequently, emissions from exhaust fumes from vehicles might reduce, thus improving air quality. Consumers should try to reduce their demand to purchase new goods by reusing and recycling their old ones. Furthermore, people can opt for energy-efficient products in order to save money and protect the environment.
In conclusion, I would contend that governments and companies are not the only forces responsible for solving environmental issues, every citizen from all over the world could help to save and protect our earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...the environment. From my point of view, all of the society should join hands in order to s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62379421222 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22045909602 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601286173633 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.63776982 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.928571429 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167868862048 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577873838512 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502463025253 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104904724982 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259850309542 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.