It is not necessary for primary school pupils in VN to go to extra class.
In recent years, parents who live in VN tend to send their child to extra classes. They hope their child will become clever. However, some of them strongly believe that their child still get high grade when they do not come to the extra classes. I am completely agreement the idea that it is not necessary for primary school pupils in VN to go to extra class.
Firstly, primary school pupils who attend an extra class are always be tension. Parents believe that the subjects are taught in school really important, but it does not provide students with all the skills necessary for their future success; consequently, pupils have to participate in many extra classes at the center to learn some skills like communication, teamwork and English after official lessons at school. Moreover, pupils must to study from morning to night with hefty schedule. They do not really have free time to entertain with their friend, take a nap at noon, or even eat some food.
Secondly, pupil’s creation tends to decrease. They have to go to extra classes and official classes all day like a robot. Obviously, they will become more passive and they will lack of creativity. For example, they study theory only at school and class; they don't know how to apply it in daily life. What is more, pupils also lack of independence. They cannot handle problems, challenges that they have to face up with and they depend on their parents and others person to help them resolve it.
On the contrary, my opponents might agree that extra classes also can help pupils get good score. To illustrate, parents think that extra classes can help their child to get most of necessary knowledge and skills. However, this is not fully convincing at a closer look because of some reasons. First, if parents compel their child study as a machine, they will hate learning; they will find out the ways to oppose. Another reason is that pupils will become rebellion. Definitely, when pupils feel too exhausted from extra classes and they study without purpose, they will overcome it by the way rebellion. As a result, pupils will drop out of class and might be got disease relate to spirit.
In conclusion, extra classes effect of health, creation and even spirit. I firmly believe home-schooling should considerer by the parents due to this method's brilliant advantages. I appreciate the way student self-study at their home highly more than they have some extra classes after school, particularly in the weekends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: class
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Suggestion: been
...ls who attend an extra class are always be tension. Parents believe that the subje...
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...e taught in school really important, but it does not provide students with all th...
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... at the center to learn some skills like communication, teamwork and English afte...
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Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...ial lessons at school. Moreover, pupils must to study from morning to night with hefty ...
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Suggestion: don't
...y theory only at school and class; they dont know how to apply it in daily life. Wha...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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...should considerer by the parents due to this methods brilliant advantages. I appreci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in conclusion, as a result, by the way, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91211401425 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47245019555 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510688836105 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.8489714556 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5416666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369708012549 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122484680477 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150997914014 0.0667982634062 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230078475695 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759884467065 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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