A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
IT is well known that a lot of places rely mainly on tourism as their biggest source of income, Tourism is a very profitable and important for all the countries and their citizens, This essay will firstly, discuss the profits of tourism and the flow of the money it brings secondly, outline the problems the is brought
by ill management of resources and man power,
One of the principal advantages of the increase in tourism is the immense
Spick in the national funds and the development of the countries, Governments Around the world try to increase their tourists count due to how much money
It brings and by reinvesting that money it comes back several folds thus developing The country more and more, A perfect example of this is Malaysia it have a lot of Landmarks such as the twin towers of kuala lumpur , the Sarawak chamber,
Batu caves and the the kinabalu mountains although it had bad economy
By promoting their country as a prim place for tourism and slowly developing it,
It became one of the world’s leading countries and leading them to have several Advancements in a lot of fields all that was possible because they had taken the Tourism industry by a storm,
One of the core disadvantages is Ill management of resources and man power Disturbing the economy and causing inflation, by putting resources and man power In wrong places and blindly investing in faulty projects thus destroying the economy And making it drop further and further worsening the livelihood of the populations And restricting the tourists making it hard for foreigners and local citizens alike ,
A prime examples of this is Egypt and its current situation on the case of the
New administrative capital that they want to build in it the tallest tower in
Africa while wasting resources, resulting in the fall of the local currency and unavailability Of foreign currency,
In conclusion, the benefits that tourism brings to countries, such as bettering the economy And giving stability to the natives, must be weight against the demerits, like economical Instabilities, overall the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, because
It has bigger success rate than failure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04709141274 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82137780641 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520775623269 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 361.0 20.2975951904 1779% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1822.0 106.682146367 1708% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 361.0 20.7667163134 1738% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 79.0 7.06120827912 1119% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.38176352705 320% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238608200733 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.238608200733 0.084324248473 283% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655191911779 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783021896069 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 182.9 13.0946893788 1397% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -294.94 50.2224549098 -587% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 144.1 11.3001002004 1275% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.49 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.65 8.58950901804 299% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 146.4 10.1190380762 1447% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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