it is now possible for scientists and people to travel to remote natural environment such as the south pole .do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, traveling beyond comfort zones is possible due to technological advancements. While I accepted that this developments can be beneficial for people and scientists to some extent, I would argue that its drawbacks are more significant.
Let us begin by looking at the advantages of travel to distant areas .One of the main positives of this advanced technology is that it is newer and more exciting type of travelling People who have traveled to most famous places prefer to explore some isolated places.to relax their souls and enjoy their vacations. They remember these experience as unforgettable memories and valuable experiences. Another important reason is that there are considerable number of discovered secret that can be useful for scientist to carry out their researches .For example, the scientists identified the ingredients of the tree bark that cure malaria.
Turning to the other side of the argument. This kind of travels has far more drawbacks. The first is that most of the remote places have difficult climate that can impact adversely on travelers health , if they are not prepared sufficiently .For instance, they are more likely to be attacked by animals in some forests, like Amazon. Another issue is that ordinary people and scientists should invest in researching and insuring the safety. The cost of travelling tend to be high and it is affordable for rich people and scientists. Therefor a small grope have a chance to use this developments.
To sum up, I believe that the demerits of being able to tourist to isolated place outweigh its merits
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2140077821 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89194303803 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626459143969 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.6290516837 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236384582484 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778523897455 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04833922082 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134996747481 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059429622858 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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