It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South pole.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.
It cannot be denied that traveling to far-flung destinations such as the poles has become more common among scientists and tourists. This essay will analyze the underlying reasons for this trend and explain why this is a negative development.
The rising interest in polar tourism is the key contributor to the increase in the number of tourists to the poles. Despite the harsh weather conditions which may put people in jeopardy, their desires for new experiences in isolated areas are still greater/ stronger. Besides, people’s living standards have significantly been improved, which allows them to afford lavish trips to the places that still remain undiscovered. Moreover, due to the high pressure at work that they have to bear, relaxation becomes an indispensable part of their lives.
Although this type of tourism has positive effects in terms of recreation and science, I reckon this development is considered a detriment. Firstly, the severe condition in these regions may have negative influences on both visitors' and researchers’ health. This means that they are more likely to suffer from illness unless they are well-equipped. For example, it is easy for them to get a bad cold or even face high risks of fatalities on account of accidents or the shortage of food. Secondly, these journeys can pose threats to the surrounding environment as people have a bad habit of throwing litter, which pollutes wildlife’s natural habitats. What is more, the regular movement of vessels also causes the icebergs which are homes to a number of marine life, to break. As a consequence, it is likely that their daily routines such as feeding and breeding be interrupted.
To conclude, the great passion for new adventures and the improvement in life quality are the main factors contributing to the development of polar tourism, and I firmly believe this is a negative trend despite the benefits it brings about.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 376, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to lavish'
Suggestion: to lavish
... allowing / which allows them to afford lavish trips to the places that still remain u...
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Line 2, column 521, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...t they have to bear, relaxation becomes an part and parcel / indispensable part of...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, i reckon, in fact, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16772151899 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90017076517 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604430379747 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7060704837 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.642857143 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167975498936 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501089830285 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045083438486 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103536542899 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061598615996 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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