it is now possible to travel to remote natural environment for travelers and scientists.
What arethe advantages and disadvantages of this development
Remote natural environment such as South Pole has always been capable of attracting eager scientist and enthusiastic tourists. With the fast moving world and advances in technology it is now easier than ever to reach to such remote places. Just like a coin have two sides, so are the advantages and disadvantages of development.
Development has been a major driver to reach such remote places which were once inaccessible to humans for years. Development in the field of technology, transport, food has proved to be of great advantage. There are various advantages of development that can be listed. It is because of improvement in the transport facilities that scientists and tourists can travel to such distances where climatic conditions are unfavorable for normal human activities. Development of roads, specially equipped vehicles and other transport facilities are a positive point. Also the advancements made in the field of aerodynamics and satellites has proved to be beneficial to tourists as they can know the existing and future weather conditions before travelling or while staying there. This can be well prepared in advanced with the help of data collected by scientists in such areas.
Scientists have benefitted a lot with the help of latest technologies in finding answers to many hidden secrets about such remote locations. Also they can conduct in-depth study relating to the various forms of life living there and know the scientific background of their survival. The experiments conducted by scientists can be of great help while setting up colonies in such remote locations in future.
Talking about the disadvantages of development, it will be responsible for higher number of people visiting these remote locations in the near future. Newer developments will result in greater exploitation of the natural resources of such serene places. Pollution and global warming will also start impacting and hence damaging the years old natural beauty of such beautiful places.
To conclude, developments if done with proper planning and selfless aim will not only save the environment but will also help us to visit and explore the magical places our planet earth has in store for us
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, such as, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30199430199 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9298167912 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9212893399 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.470588235 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752361639468 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364118860701 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122014550591 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501541103625 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.