Some people believe that it is good having people with extremely high income in the country. While other think that govt. should try to limit it. Discuss and give your opinion?
In this modern epoch, people are earning according to their qualification and ability to perform work, some are having high salaries and some some work at low wages. Their are some socialist those believe that it is not for the society and government should put some restrictions to balance the economy. I shall delve my vies in the upcoming paragraphs.
to embark with, as people are earning high income because of the profession they choose to work. Moreover, people working in multi national companies will definitely earn good amount of money, as compare to others. Sometimes, people use unfair means to earn more and more, to curb this government should check their earning way. Although, as their are some people those who are earning less wages, as they are not having proper knowledge about their creativity. To exemplify, people those are working in the mechanical field in a highly reputed company will definitely earn more, and if one has open his shop may earn less.
On the other hand, earning high remuneration will create inequality among people. However, if government will put ban on the earning it will affect the government treasure in one or the other way. Furthermore, if a individual is earning high salaries, they they will pay high taxes which is used for the welfare of the economy. Likewise, by collecting taxes from the affluent people, the authorities can operate certain welfare functions such as free education and medicine for poor.
To recapitulate, government should not set a ban on the earning of people, as it will stop them to perform more effectively in their working field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00740740741 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62017078156 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9626261039 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179647640868 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757209006843 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554478635319 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107722920286 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067297489354 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.