Transformation, evolution and movement are some undeniable aspects of life. Many claim that these represents the best parts of the experience of living and it is positive for people. Others, would rather have a rutinary lifestyle without many surprises. Personally, I believe that the benefits of change are better.
Many modern studies focus on human behaviour, some of them have stablished that the more changes we suffer the more are our brains adapt to the environment. It is known that the more plastic our brain becomes the easier it is to face challenges and as a consequence not to suffer from those but to thrive. Life on earth is defenitely very difficult to predict, we know nature evolves demanding from us to do so as well If we are not used to that, when it happens it could be a traumatic experience.
On the other hand, change it is by all means a stress agent. The best aproach to change involves a cycle period, meaning it needs time. Firstly, a moment for the person to understand the situation that it is being modified, then think the best approach to solve it and take action and then comes the satisfaction of resolution. If any step of this process is constantly interrupted it will create unnecesary stress which wont lead to a state of wellbeing rather than to a state of depression and exhaustion.
In conclusion, evolution is part of life, some embrace it in a positive note, while others may suffer it more than enjoy it. In my opinion change represents mostly a profit to life, however, if it is too much it could overload our systems to cope with it and be detrimental.
- These days, too many people maintain their health by relying on doctors and medicine, rather than following a healthy lifestyle.To what extent do you agree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own kn 78
- It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages? 61
- These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development? 73
- These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun claim seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many claims'.
Suggestion: Many claims
...nt are some undeniable aspects of life. Many claim that these represents the best parts of...
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Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s time. Firstly, a moment for the person to understand the situation that it is b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6961130742 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74258673837 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579505300353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.557658035 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.230769231 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146566660335 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505020187895 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399917736038 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806823671042 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136233273768 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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