It is often considered that change is more beneficial than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same.
Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages?
It is believed that changes may bring more benefits than staying in an old style. Although a changeable life may cause some disorder, I am of the opinion that the advantages of change exceed its drawbacks.
On the one hand, changes are sometimes expensive, overwhelming and tiring. As a matter of fact, some people are not able to cope with changes which may cause confusion, perplexity and inconvenience. For instance, when a person wants to move to a new house, they have to deal with many things like: rearrangement, redecoration, and transport fees which are sometimes costly and time-consuming. In another example, a student who has just moved to a new school often complains of having no friends to play with.
On the other hand, any new situation that a person encounters can be an opportunity to learn and grow as a person. In fact, when dealing with a new challenge, people can gain more hands-on experience and skills which can be beneficial for them in the next situation. Moreover, changing is also a good chance for them to be more adaptable and flexible. In addition, change can help people improve their quality of life, create more favorable conditions. For example, changing the decorations of your bedroom can help you feel more refreshed or even reduce stress.
To sum up, while people may be overwhelmed with changes, I believe that the benefits of changes far surpass its downsides as it brings people with many opportunities to gain a better life.
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- It is often considered that change is more beneficial than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages 61
- It is often considered that change is more beneficial than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages 61
- It is often considered that change is more beneficial than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an old style" with adverb for "old"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...es may bring more benefits than staying in an old style. Although a changeable life may cause s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, as a matter of fact, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.924 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86959509339 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0002815305 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.583333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181305180245 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771245557587 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432275576798 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109975189851 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045324055546 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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