It is often said that governments spend much on projects to protect wildlife while there are other problems that are more important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, it is believed that the funds allocated to protecting wild animals is way too much whereas there are other sectors which are vital. In my opinion, I disagree with this belief.
There are some compelling reasons why I believe spending on wild animals is not a waste. Firstly, the part of the project can focus on feeding and this make the animals enticing to its visitors. This is because they will be well fed and looking healthy. How can a chimpanzee be jumping from one height to another its hungry?. Also, the environment of the zoo they are kept in will be well kept thereby improving their healthy status. For instance, the environment of the University of Ibadan's zoo is very comfortable and the creatures neat and healthy that tourists take a shot with them without being irritated. If the state do not spend on protecting them, nobody will.
Others might disagree and say that such funds be better spent on in solving other vital problems such as health sector and citizens safety. Undoubtedly, some importance are attached to these. However, I tend to disagree that the wild life has taken much of the government income. This is because they are animals and cannot cater for themselves except someone does that. For instance, a female Whale was seen stranded on the seashore probably because of hunger, but because it is not human and can be dangerous, it was killed and its meat shared among the residents. If much provision have been made for these creatures, such incidence would not have occurred.
In conclusion, it is my opinion that no amount of money spent on wildlife protection is too much. If there is need to fund other sectors, the government can always generate or raise funds elsewhere.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...us. For instance, the environment of the University of Ibadans zoo is very comfor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84511784512 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52676497917 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579124579125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3249424083 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6470588235 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151681789875 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493463016887 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525119215438 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999894474883 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285417550548 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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