The role of robots are expected to increase in the future. Robots will be used in any kind of working areas instead of human beings in next years and it will be a negative effect to humanity because it increases the percentage of unemployment.
Robots are used in different kind of industries such as manufacturing and medical areas to replace humans. They can do the given task on time with high-quality, comparing to the humans, robots do not need time to have a rest. Utilizing robots in risky work is less dangerous than people. For example, in medical fields, using humanoid robots are becoming common as it prevents people from spreading harmful viruses.
On the other hand, replacing workers with robots is considered as a negative development because it increases the rate of unemployment. Employees lose their jobs as robots are cheap and have an ability to work non-stop and it helps to the company to increase the productivity. However it is a bad effect to humans as it is difficult to find a job for making money for living. For instance, 3 years before, each school had their own accountant but now there is only 6 accountants to all 30 schools in the city because of the technology of robots and other 24 accountants are unemployed.
In conclusion, utilizing robots will decrease the percentage of employment in upcoming years and this will be a negative impact on human-beings by taking away their jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[3]
Message: Did you mean 'to time'?
Suggestion: to time
...aring to the humans, robots do not need time to have a rest. Utilizing robots in ris...
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Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...e company to increase the productivity. However it is a bad effect to humans as it is d...
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Line 5, column 467, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r own accountant but now there is only 6 accountants to all 30 schools in the cit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85655737705 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84716332896 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553278688525 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4181672611 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.727272727 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297253579331 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1193842131 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072849992033 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198525305089 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068896825805 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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