Many students nowadays are deciding to further study abroad What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad

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Many students, nowadays, are deciding to further study abroad. What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad?

Majority of students, these days, are want to study further study foreign countries and they are deciding to that. In this writing task, I am going to write the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad.

There we can see a lot of benefits of studying abroad. For continuing our education in other countries, our knowledge should be enough for that study system. When we study abroad, we can learn that country's traditions and customs. It helps to consolidate the ability of speaking with native speakers in other countries. Also, it is useful to learn that country's history. In other words, studying abroad is the base of enriching the knowledge and colouring the mind.

Another good side of that, we can advertise our country's ancient places and it improves the tourism of our Uzbekistan.

As I mentioned above, studying abroad has got some disadvantages to the student. Because, it is very difficult to live without your family, and also, living in stranger places can give a depression to the student. It stands a way of studying and it can affect to the student's psychology.

In my point of view, everything is depend on the student's himself or herself. If students are an outgoing people, they will not have any difficulties in foreign countries. They can enjoy studying and living in other country.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99095022624 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74606582977 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570135746606 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.679714713 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.5333333333 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7333333333 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.86666666667 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34069541303 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124395394741 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104880524711 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175439631313 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108895597045 0.056905535591 191% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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