It is said that adulterated food is the key reason behind Detoriated health of all age goups masses. How far you agree or disagree with it ?
Food afdulteration is an addition of another substance in food to increase the quantity of food. Apparently modernisation of technology is the most pressing concern to regarding the given topic, Is food adultration the main reason of bad health of all age groups? I completely agree with the statement and shall explore some main reason of this in fourthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with , Food adultration is divided into three types. First is intentionally in which food is adultrated for financial benefits. Food is adultrated by preservatives, poisnous substances and colours. For example tea, firstly tea is processed by the addision of chemicals and coloured, this may be the cause of liver damage or heart attack.
Moving further, second kind is unintentionally adultrated food. Food is adultrated due to ignorance, wrong packaging, lack of hygenic facilities. It effects the taste, loss of nutritious value. It causes chronic health diseases and vomiting etcetra .
At last the third type is natural adultration, in which food is adultrated by pesticides or insecticides and fertilizers. For example wheat in which number of pesticides is evolved in the growth. Which cause cancer, diabetes and other problems related to kidney.
To conclude that, adultrated food is a big issue of modern society . Allmost all the foods are adultrated by some substances which may cause various health problems that is very dangerous and may be the reason of death
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, firstly, may, regarding, second, so, third, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34632034632 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07230482 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0717456616 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1875 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4375 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16719988801 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570533453803 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477010518338 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993267267783 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682835341439 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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