Many People suffer from isomnia . What do you think, is it caused by increasing pace of life or the individuals life style is at fault?
With the rise in modernisation, there are many problems came to know in the world. One of these is Isomnia. In this problem, people cannot sleep at night. Many masses believe that, it is cost by increasing pace of life while others think that individual’s lifestyle is the main fault. I shall explore the causes of this forthcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, The most pressing concern about Isomnia is individual,s lifestyle. Isomnia is caused by person’s Daily diet and its day-to-day activities. People suffer more if they don’t have proper diet plan. Moreover, second reason for this is poor environment of room because in which room we sleep, if it has air-pollution or noise pollution then we can sleep well.So, sleeping room must have very good environment fir sleeping.
On the contrary side, no doubt time is the major reason for this but increasing pace of life is also the reason of isomnia. People working more and more to get success in life. Pressure of society or family also force person to do more work. These tensions create a extra stress on individuals mind. Because it is too difficult to manage your expenditures and fulfill all the requirements of the family. Eventhat most of the students suffer from isomnia due to thd burden of studies.
In conclusion, Isomnia is a very big problem of the society and majority of people face thi problem. We can feel relief ftom this disease by limiting our daily sleep hours. Although, we feel relax for 1 an hour before sleeping and this will definitely helpful to cure isomnia. Moreover, we can go to doctor and take a proper treatment of this. Hence, isomnia will be cure by taking some good actions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, no doubt, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87152777778 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73014498651 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1345049806 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.15 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249442625278 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684643050457 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675109201149 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155339234165 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101374361635 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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