It said that adultered food is key reason behind deteriorated health of all age group masses. How for you agree or disagree with it?
Adulteration is an addition of other substance to a food item in order to increase the quantity. The food product face to meal legal standard. The given topic asserts that adultered food is reason behind all health age group people. I completely agree with this statement and shell explorer the same from various aspects in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, there are three types of adulteration are intentional, unintentional and nattral adulteration. Firstly, intentionally is usually done for financial game. The most common from of an adulteration is colour adulteration. However, many people added of extera additive minerals. For instance, tea processed and coloured tea leaves. Many people suffer from heart diseases and some are loss their eyesight.
Furthermore, unintentional adulteration is a result of ignorance or the lack of facilities to maintain food quality. This may be caused by spill over aspect pesticides and foeticides. Also, people way of packaging is wrong. There are many other effects as well. Sometime food is tasteless. It is also reason behind this, lack of hygienic facilities. Whereas, they lose of nutritional value. They suffer from chronic health problems, vomiting and diarrhoea.
Movingfurther, natural adulteration occurs due to present of certain chemical organic compounds and radicals naturally occurring in foods which are injured to health and not added to the food intentional or unintentional. They can excessive use of chemicals, pesticides and insecticides and fertilisers in the food adulteration. So they suffer from many diseases, like a liver diseases and they also suffer from kidney stones and stomach disorders.
In conclusion, as we have seen there are number of answers to this question on balance. However, i tend to believe that food is the basic intensity of life. It should be pour nutrition free from all type of adulteration from proper adulteration and earns because one work is hard and earns to satisfy one hunger.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37380191693 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03706681974 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594249201278 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8388250371 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0833333333 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0416666667 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171671872401 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465199223257 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075601441389 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100354788349 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873536399542 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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