It is seen that older adults are not given enough respect and facilities in many countries. What could be the reason for this? What are effects of this?
It is irrefutable that senior citizens are the backbone of every society. Therefore, there is no doubt the graying society should get respect, but in present scenario older people are treated very rudely, even by their own children. However, it is stigma on present generation and has very bad effect on society. This essay discus several reasons behind inadequate respect and attention received by senior people and highlight its effects on society.
To begin with, there are several reasons in regard to the declining respects for elderly people. The prime factor, the family bonding and parents teaching methods at home are to be blamed. The family value and bond are no longer important to the young generation these days. Although youngsters not entirely responsible for this social debasement as parents nowadays are too busy to teach their children morality. Secondly, graying society being physically weaker fail to do fulltime jobs and hence contribute negligible to country’s economy. Furthermore, with reduced income they expect tax rebate, pension, discounts and so forth. Moreover, increase in age leads to higher intensive health care facilities. All these issues contribute negatively to the country’s economy. Therefore, some countries show reluctance in offering support and respect to old people.
On the paradoxical side, there are egregious consequences of lack of support from government to the older population. Firstly, it results to dissatisfaction against system and country. Also, elderly people become pessimistic and frustrated about life. What’s more, lack of support from government creates financial burden on their family members, which creates problem among the members. Consequently, such development leads to imbalance in the society and people perceive old age as curse.
To conclude, the lack of respect towards the elderly is a great concern and to mitigate this problem, countries must change their approach towards older people and utilize their skills in proper way to maintain positive growth in all age groups.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, no doubt, in regard to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52848101266 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72991602724 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617088607595 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6809979971 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9473684211 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6315789474 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.10526315789 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19072931696 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448614054386 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450162539828 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100686470182 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349247599991 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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