In most parts of the world, when individuals reach 30 years of age, they are considered mature enough to get married. Moreover, it is treated as a prime age for a number of reasons. As far as I am concerned, this opinion may not be agreeable in all cases.
To elaborate, once a human passes the teenage, he enters the real world and starts leading independent life. As a result, he comes across multiple challenges which makes him more responsible and wise. Decision making, financial planning and social awareness are some key lessons taught during this period. Consequently, more maturity is attained by the time he reaches 30. In many societies this is a common scenario among many, which provoked them to think it as a right age to marry.
On the other hand, this is the phase when most people start earning and so wish to fulfill their dreams, especially related to pleasure. While some people like to travel, some wish to buy their favorite gadgets which are unaffordable during their earlier years. For instance, a survey recently showed that a high percentage of travelers these days are people below 30 years of age. That being said, marriage may confine their joy to some extent as a result of added responsibility of family.
Additionally, a predetermined age for wedding may create an additional pressure among bachelors and their parents. Especially, in countries like India where arranged marriages are prominent, this is a usual occurrence. Additionally, economic status of each person differs and hence their readiness for marriage may vary.
On the whole, while getting married before 30 may have some benefits, there are some cons for individuals as well as their parents. After all, marriage should be a choice left to a person, not to society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, after all, for instance, as a result, as well as, in all cases, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98653198653 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7305297092 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626262626263 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.6987872989 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.1176470588 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94117647059 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214194921848 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634633647147 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494186343771 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126344555595 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646085159882 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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