Some people think that, individuals are advised to get married before majority and they are think, that is best for society and for yourself.
Firstly it is encourageble to get married before 30, because, you van live with your partner more and can have children earlier. In other words, people can marry when both parties can fully support themselves. And can also provide for their children early and so about their business or their career. But by getting married early you can lose with your childhood, you will rest for a walk, but not as it was before. There may be healthy problems if you get married early.
Secondly, to get married after 30 it is good, because the age before adulthood, considered to be a reproductive age. Also, you can build your career, you can fully support yourself, you will be free and do with your favorite things. Scientists say, that people who to get married after 30 leads to many diseases, for example sterility. According to an article published in The Guardian people in the age bracket of 35 to 40 are more likely to face problems of infertility, and even complications in pregnancy.
In conclusion I believe that people can get married before 30, because it makes their relationships more fruitful and strong, also, they can live more with their partners and live without of stresses. To get married, will not only leads to happy marital relations, but also setting a good examples for other in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
...et married before majority and they are think, that is best for society and for yours...
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Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to an article published in The Guardian people in the age bracket of 35 to 40 ar...
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Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...stresses. To get married, will not only leads to happy marital relations, but also se...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54515696962 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5798224524 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.833333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341823618319 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140457580075 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847610987062 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244072562033 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783852664389 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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