It is suggested that all the young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community
Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people?
The issue of young adults volunteering in the community without being paid has become a matter of great concern in the society. While this might have drawbacks to them, more benefits will be favourable not just for the accumulated learning that the young people can experience but, also this will bring in pride to the community.
The unpaid work that young adults will do to the community is a great help for them to gain more experiences useful for their future jobs. In this way, their credentials will be awesome when they will apply in any large companies. For instance, management prefer to hire newly graduated students who had done volunteer work in their premises because they are already knowledgeable with their tasks and it will be easy for them to cope with other workers. Also, by doing unpaid jobs can instill a sense of responsibility at an early age so that when the real job comes in, it will not be cumbersome for them.
It is an exceptional occurrence that some group of adolescents brings pride to the company by doing volunteer jobs because it is fulfilling for them. Enduring long hours of the day by doing tasks that are not paid is not easy, however, with perseverance, patience and hard work , all are achievable. Moreover, some neighboring places may also urge their young adults to do free work to improve their community. For example: doing community service in public parks and beaches by clean-up drive projects. In addition to that, helping to serve the elderly in some nursing homes every weekend are just few of the commendable experience that young adults can make in the community.
To sum up, young adults should always consider doing volunteer work as this will benefit them to become a productive citizen wherein they can bring pride and honor to the community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ith perseverance, patience and hard work , all are achievable. Moreover, some neig...
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Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...become a productive citizen wherein they can bring pride and honor to the communi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, moreover, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87378640777 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58382062695 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533980582524 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.3625421209 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229658759165 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917918359442 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740426712007 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162755931585 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513653341384 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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