The bar chart below shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for last year. The line shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for the last 40 years.
Both graphs depict the average rainfall for Australia from January to December. The difference was, the bar graph was for last year and the line graph was for the last 40 years.
Overall, it was clear that for both periods the first three months had the highest rainfall and after six months, the lowest period for both years were recorded.
40 years ago, the highest rainfall happened in January with an average of almost 80 mm. It dramatically decrease until the month of September wherein, three-fourth difference was noticed compared to the average rainfall in the beginning of the year. In September, the lowest rainfall was recorded around 20 mm. In contrast, the rainfall suddenly rise from the month of October until it reached over 50 mm at the end of the year.
Last year’s rainfall, that was illustrated through the bar graph, it was also noticeable that the first three months the rainfall were high at around 60-70 mm. A sudden drop to almost 20mm happened in April and increased to over 40 mm after a month. The rainfall started to decrease again from the month of June until October and the lowest peak reached less than 20 mm for both months ( August and October). Apparently, a remarkable rise of rainfall happened in the last two months of the year averaging to around 40 mm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
...verage of almost 80 mm. It dramatically decrease until the month of September wherein, t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... reached less than 20 mm for both months August and October. Apparently, a remark...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, if, so, as for, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79203539823 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45439650054 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455752212389 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1845590556 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4545454545 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416485377679 0.215688989381 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178298571536 0.103423049105 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872323451296 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287423844627 0.15604864568 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917910487866 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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