It is true that in some countries grandparents play a significant role in bringing up
children. This trend has both positive and negative sides. Let’s look at the positive
side first.
These days, in some developed countries, the role of grandparents in raising children increasingly become very critical because they can have more free time for focusing on caring their children. But it is highly debatable that whether or not taking care of children done by them is effective. In this essay, reasons why they can support in ensuring the best development of children will be discussed.
The most important thing that the elderly have is experience. Compared with parents’ children, they own practical skills of getting the best thing for children because they have experience all ups and downs of caring for a child. For instance, the elderly have some folk tricks in themselves that may work usefully in some particular circumstances like the usage of mental leaves for reducing stress and hot fever…So, without the elderly’s experience, children’s parents can not learn that thing from anyone else. What’s more, when being faced with trouble in the life, grandparents can equip their children with superb advices or proper attitudes that can help them get it through perfectly.
Apart from owing valuable experiences, previous generations like grandparents are firmly to have more free time than children’ parents. By that way, they can stay with them all day from school to home. Sometimes, when their parents are stuck in a bunch of deadlines, they can teach their children and even sleep with them if needed. Otherwise, lacking the love of parents, some children will be able to fall into autism or become self-isolate from their family unexpectedly.
To sum up, loving and caring for children is a very significant mission in each family. Therefore, the presence of grandparents can ensure that children will not fall into loneliness and will always have someone to share with when their parents are absent from home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ildren. But it is highly debatable that whether or not taking care of children done by them is...
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Suggestion: So
...eaves for reducing stress and hot fever…So, without the elderly’s experience, chil...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can help them get it through perfectly. Apart from owing valuable experiences, p...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hen their parents are absent from home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, apart from, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71354421785 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563333333333 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0091708968 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.769230769 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108708644332 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466889965163 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300613215582 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807910997146 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205508620285 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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