In my opinion, students not only need to be hard at school, but studying on the internet also provides them a great number of advantages.
To begin with, Internet makes it easier for students to find online courses and documents to study. It can easily offer everything children want. Because of this, online learning gives us the chance to develop our self-study abilities and quality, which enhances the learning experience for students.
Secondly, online learning is interactive and efficient. It offers a variety of resources such as convenient websites and videos. If we do not understand any lessons at school, we can search for documents on the internet to review old lessons easily that helps us to remember the lessons better and extra knowledge.
Last but not least, studying on the internet create our learning motivation. These days, many apps are designed with a view of not only supporting students but also relaxing, we can listen to music or watch cartoon, which makes us find studying more interesting and we canstudy more effective.
In conclusion, time spent studying online is not at all wasted. Students today benefit greatly from advancements in the internet.
- It is very important that children should study hard at school Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted Do you agree or disagree You should write at least 250 words 56
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success in school Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 80
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These days, Internet is…
These days, Internet is needed in every work in the life. It can be considered as an indispensable tool in the life nowadays. Some people think that time spent studying on the Internet is time-consuming. From my point of view, I completely disagree with this statement.
First of all, it is worth considering to be a global citizen, you need to learn and practice using popular computer programs. you can download internet browser to update new information all over the world. This helps you enlarge the knowledge about everything around the world. Moreover, computer will be used popularly in the future, so children using computer and internet at the early age helps them catch up with global trends.
Another point worth noting is that apps and websites on the Internet are designed to offers the students' interests. This helps students acquis knowledge faster and remember it longer than usual. It is really a great way to make their study not boring and more effective.
All things considered, Internet is a tool for every work at present and in the future. Children spend time studying on the internet is a good thing and sometimes it is better than study at school.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 193.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21761658031 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72574319488 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616580310881 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.2374289202 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5454545455 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189043808986 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753733665519 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807149075019 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119337090038 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628169484692 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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