It is very important that children should study hard at school. Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted. Do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.
Ever since the advent of the Internet, many fields of life have changed, including education. As more and more students are studying on the Internet, it has been argued that they should only focus on schoolwork. As far as I am concerned, the Internet is a great tool for their learning process for its abundant sources of information as well as its assistance in helping their developing self- study skills.
Initially, it is evident that the Internet contains almost anything one needs to know. From latest events in the world to mathematical formulas, one can search for necessary information with a few clicks using search engines such as Google or Bing. As a result, students can either receive help with their schoolwork or learn a variety of skills and knowledge that are not taught at school.
Additionally, the Internet enables them to practice and better their self-study skills which is a vital factor in improving academic performance. For example, not only can they download study materials, but they can also access websites that provide suitable methods of learning or even lectures by qualified teachers. That all these can be done by students themselves means they no longer have to rely completely on school to enhance their knowledge.
In conclusion, the Internet works wonders for one's education in that it presents one with any information needed and assists one in building up self-study skills. It is advisable that learners know how to make good use of this contrivance with a view to broadening their horizons for their own sake.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'From the latest'.
Suggestion: From the latest
...ains almost anything one needs to know. From latest events in the world to mathematical for...
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Line 6, column 48, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...clusion, the Internet works wonders for ones education in that it presents one with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0503875969 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74000305287 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62015503876 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.238088639 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.454545455 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106287851371 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438062132236 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352084069946 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656294562892 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273867937711 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.