many people say that teachers play an important role in education Do you agree or disagree with this statement

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many people say that teachers play an important role in education. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, there are many factors affecting children’s ways to success. It can not be denied that teachers influence significantly on a child’s education. Firstly, teachers play an important role as the second educators and secondly, they give students primary facilities of learning.

First of all, it is true that teachers are our second educators who guide us on the ways to become good people. They set the suitable approaches for us, we are helped to avoid studying on wrong methods by educators. Teachers also educate us about soft skills, leadership skills… . They inspire and motivate learners to reach their full potential. Students are guided in setting goals, then overcoming making responsible choices.

Moreover, teacher provide learners primary facilities of learning, teacher are people who were well-qualified, they possess knowedge and expertise required for effectively convey academic content to students, therefore learners are always educated the requirements in learing. Furthermore, through well-structed lessons, explanations and academic demonstrations, teachers help students grasp complex concepts and acquire new skills.

In conclusion, educators play a very important role in guiding a child to success on the most proper way for them.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, in conclusion, first of all, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 187.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8449197861 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06162653493 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705882352941 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.7908740544 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3636363636 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0909090909 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196847015649 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713253177066 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708420254365 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132414033235 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604940147722 0.056905535591 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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