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Submitted by Kamal1993 on Wed, 09/04/2019 - 06:22
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Parents should spend more time with their children helping them with their homework.Do you agree or disagree.
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Submitted by Kamal1993 on Wed, 09/04/2019 - 06:22
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Parents should spend more time with their children helping them with their homework.Do you agree or disagree.
Mother and father should utilize a vast amount of time with their offspring to assist them in their study.i strongly agree with this notion because it is helpful to improve children is weakness in their education and strong their relationship .
The major reason to support this view is that it is beneficial for guardian to improve mistakes of their children in study because if parents help their offspring to do their homework then they can know about the weakness of their kids in all subjects and can try to improve that faults and helpful to save money which mother and father spend on tuition classes which provided to their children,in addition to this,they use this money on another activity of their kids. For example,a survey by media telling that 4 out of 10 student can improving their result in school,due to receive help in their study by parents.
The another reason is that it is better to make strong relationships with both the reason is that children always feel secure with their progenitors and comfortable share problems with them.in addition to this,if guardian can utilise their more time with kids then they can build up strong bond with them as well as make a friendly relation ,due to this,children can easily share all information and hurdles with mother and father.moreover,they both are capable to understand each other.for example,a report printed by newspaper shows that in 2018,2out of 10 offspring are caught by disorders disease,due to lack of time spending with their parents.
In conclusion,spend a huge amount of time by progenitors with their offspring to help them in their study is good because it is better to improve children’s mistakes and making deep relationships with them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21086261981 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83589275712 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485623003195 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 179.858277541 49.4020404114 364% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 271.833333333 106.682146367 255% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.1666666667 20.7667163134 251% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.500785282472 0.244688304435 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.326271063708 0.084324248473 387% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.217196937425 0.0667982634062 325% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335556024661 0.151304729494 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143734997637 0.056905535591 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.2 13.0946893788 223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.16 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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