Today, number of tourism increasing day by day in tourism countries? What is its effects? How is it beneficial for globe?
Due to reduction in air fares which give huge opportunities to humans for commuting in the various regions as a tourist. However, tourism create a lot of complications for the nations such as increasing garbage to pollute environment, exploitation of the natural resources as well as decline importance of the local cultures. In contrast, it offers uncountable benefits like enhance economy conditions, provide the foreign currency, job opportunities and helpful for the world in several manners.
To begin with, tourism affects the worldwide with various obstacles and an initial is that a vast amount of commuters are creating a huge proportion of rubbish on tourists places which lead to polluted our atmosphere. For example, in Agra, a regime record that they collected about 2 tonnes of trash every year from the Taj Mahal who is one of seven wonders. Even though, these waste have produced by visitors who visit on this place and these is the mixture of plastics, polythenes and etcetera. In addition to this, when tourists come in the host countries than they not only grow pollutions but also expanding dramatically natural resources. As a result, our upcoming generations enduring from lack of natural resources in futures. Last but not least, foreigners people when they are visiting in tourism regions than they are harmful for local cultures the reason is that local citizens tries to follow their cultures and traditions and start neglect their own rituals as well as cultures.
Nevertheless, there are numerous bright sides of this perception and the main is that a large percentage of tourists visiting in tourism regions not only upgrading their economy situations but also providing foreign currencies in a form of taxes, prices of purchasing goods and so on. For instance, Thailand, Bali and Marscuits are those nations which economy highly dependent on tourism and are tourism friendly countries. Furthermore, a drastic rise in tourism are opening huge chances of jobs for jobless people in several ways. For example, if a vast proportion of visitors are entering in host regions than they needs a hotel for staying. Additionally, hotels required more staff members to handle customers like this other such as transportation services, tour guide agencies, shopkeepers as well demanding more staff to deal with commuters. All in all, tourism are assist nations to reduce gradually percentage of unemployment.
In conclusion, although, air-travelling make it convenient for masses to cover longer distance within short periods but it creates so many hurdles which badly effect regions and their natives. In other words, tourism are offering aid people to gain knowledge about each other’s cultures and many more pros.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in short, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2319.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31880733945 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85964476397 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564220183486 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 716.4 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.207105906 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.411764706 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6470588235 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2352941176 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160895653923 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534077688902 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425945755768 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100109890335 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313221622887 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 78.4519038076 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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