The key to solving the environmental problem is simple: the present generation is willing to accept a less comfortable life for the sake of the future generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The environment is the crucial factor in human life that concerns governments and individuals worldwide. Therefore, some people say that people who are living in the current era should give priority to needed actions to improve it instead of their comfort themselves. I totally agree with this viewpoint, and I will explain why in the following paragraphs.
There are numerous actions that humans can take to improve the environment. First, alter the way we choose unfriendly environmental materials. For example, instead of using plastic bags or bottles, we can choose recyclable products that are made from paper or PET plastic. Second, reusing used utensils or containers, such as old bottles, old clothes, or old furniture. Third, reducing the use of products that are disposable, ranging from chopsticks, folks, spoons, cups, and straws. Moreover, we should turn off the lights and other electric devices to save power when we go out of the room and save water as much as possible.
Admittedly, changing habits is hard and inconvenient for each individual. For example, when we go to the supermarket, we have to remember to bring our own cloth bag to store groceries instead of using plastic bags there, or we have to carry our own cup or bottle rather than using disposable items. However, for a bright future, everyone’s efforts are necessary, and we should do all in our power to achieve that.
In conclusion, if everybody is aware of how the environment affects their lives, they will do their best to improve it, not just take a few inconvenient actions.
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both these views an 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, third, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06923076923 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86990093225 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619230769231 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.730595548 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.8 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0773152268179 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307163990311 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257761188732 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0480113297652 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143516570585 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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