Nowadays more and more older people who need employment have to compete
with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are
the solutions?
In the present world, seniors have to experience competition in the job market with younger people. There are numerous causes regarding this issue which will be discussed along with some solutions in this essay.
First of all, more senior workers being employed may increase the rate of youth unemployment. As there are employers in favor of old people's skills and experience, many young people are not taken on. However, this can have a deteriorating effect on society as they may resort to crimes such as stealing or pickpocketing to earn a living. As a result, a great number of employers feel the need to hire the youth to prevent potential criminals, thus fewer seniors get taken on. Second of all, old people lack the strength and technology knowledge of the youth. As the job market is constantly shifting, more and more work requires operating machines and modern devices, which puts the youth at an advantage because they have had access to these since a young age. Moreover, young people are generally stronger and more durable than the seniors, thus they are more helpful in a blue-collar job.
In order to mitigate these problems, employers ought to provide more job opportunities for seniors. For example, white-collar jobs such as being an office worker are certainly more suitable for old people than for the youth as they are only required to sit in one place and write reports. Furthermore, the government should offer more services to old employees. For instance, special healthcare and other social welfare payments should be provided so they are able to live without having to compete for a job with the youth.
To summarize, the modern job market has made it difficult for seniors to look for jobs as they have to compete with younger laborers for them. Therefore, it is essential for employers and the government to help them deal with employment problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96835443038 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64738596724 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553797468354 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4791569103 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355060317911 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121050192502 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465002516566 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21718965387 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187416689902 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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