A large number of deaths are caused by road accidents . Why do so many accidents occur ? Make recommendations that would help to reduce the number of road accidents
Road mishappening is responsible for losing human life. This essay intends to discuss the possible reasons for road accidents and also suggest ways to overpower the problem.
To begin with, the primary reason for road mishappenings is the poor conditions of road pavements. In other words, during the construction of roads, government bodies use poor-quality materials; consequently, patches and holes on the road become inevitable that are directly responsible for unforeseen occurrences on roads. The second blame goes to the reckless driving by individuals. More specifically, due to the flexibility in driving rules and regulations, the masses do not implement them. For instance, a survey of the Indian National Highway Authority found that 70 percent of drivers mix drink and drive, which is the primary cause of road mishaps.
The solutions are not simple, but government and the local public can take many steps to alleviate this problem. First and foremost is that authorities should make strict laws. For example, a vast penalty should apply for over-speeded vehicles. Moreover, if someone mixes drinks and drives, then their driving license must be pound by the traffic police. Lastly, highway authorities must work on the quality of materials provided during construction. As a result, it will enhance the durability of pavements, and tearing roads will not occur.
In conclusion, after mulling up the whole issue, poor quality of road and inappropriate driving by the public are mainly accountable for unforeseen road occurrences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, lastly, moreover, second, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44583333333 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97103786112 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6375 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4178446455 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3571428571 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15768089815 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511323356107 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452894327281 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101136021717 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342398867814 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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