A large numumber of deaths are caused by roads accidents.
# why do so many accidents occur.
#make recommendations that would help to reduce the road accodents.
undoubtedly, this is the fact that this world is surrounded by various problems. Among them is accidents which are caused by several of factor. But it could be tackled if viable initiatives are taken into consideration. Hence, this essay intends to highlight the causes as well as solutions.
To embark upon, there are several reasons why i think accidents are increased nowadays. Firstly, the roads are not well infrastructured due to this accidents and traffic conjection is witnessed. To solving this problem, administrative should spent their money for infrastructure the roads. Secondly, traffic light rules are not followed by dwellers. Owing to this, accidents are seen. To tackle this problem government should fine to those people who do not follow the rules of traffic lights.
Moving further, in today's era everyone have their own vehicles and they use it to go to job or other places. As a result, jams are seen on the roads by vehicles. So, higher authority should provide facilities in the buses and reduce the fairs of it. This problem cannot be only handled by government but also dwellers take the actions to solving it. They can use car pooling to go at one place.
In conclusion, this problem can be very well and effectively handled with the joint and collaborative efforts of higher authority, individuals as well as society on the whole.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Undoubtedly
undoubtedly, this is the fact that this world is su...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ark upon, there are several reasons why i think accidents are increased nowadays....
^
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ads are not well infrastructured due to this accidents and traffic conjection is wit...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03083700441 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83067672039 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621145374449 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3635959644 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.375 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1875 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128310773635 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482162282637 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568145860226 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661395166468 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467813555002 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Undoubtedly
undoubtedly, this is the fact that this world is su...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ark upon, there are several reasons why i think accidents are increased nowadays....
^
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ads are not well infrastructured due to this accidents and traffic conjection is wit...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03083700441 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83067672039 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621145374449 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3635959644 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.375 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1875 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128310773635 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482162282637 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568145860226 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661395166468 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467813555002 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.