In the last century, the first man to walk on the moon said it was "a giant leap for mankind”. However, some people think it has made little difference to our daily lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often said that putting the first time on the moon was a significant discovery, however, humans’ lifestyles have not changed far considerably. Personally, I feel that majority people earned minimal benefits from a giant leap and I will explain why.
The main obstacle would appear that the investment which was spent for space project is less crucial issue than problems the world had been faced in that period. If the money were spent for children in a shortage of food in the Africa, how many people would be survived in that time. Furthermore, instead of focusing on the space voyage, international organizations should have paying attention on health sector. Although we are living on the high technological world which can be treated majority disorders, today the vast of people in the world may lead to danger of death caused from vaccine against for CoVid-19 virus cannot be discovered. If it had been invested on a health sector, the virus ,which humans’ has faced, might have not extended.
Admittedly, the occurrence which was to walk on the moon in the first time was a giant leap for galactic science. Nevertheless, it could not a significant event as equal as being able to solve problems people have.
To conclude, the space exploration is not essential compared with issues the nation has been encountered, thus, social problems which have to solve crucially would be invested rather than exploring the space. Perhaps, the time which exploring a galactic space may be essential for humans’ life will be soon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, as to, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02734375 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72643657929 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6131939371 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126900642924 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580672682156 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679279569435 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103692931953 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722660961083 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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