Leaders and directors in an organisation are normally older people. Some people think younger lader would be better.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
nowadays, leadership plays a crucial role for the development of operates. Many belief that leaders and directors should be older people because of long, accumulated experiences. another argues that young labour will be young active generation for being pioneers of company; however, in my opinion, all kind of aged could be in the lead for following reasons.
Firstly, there is no point in denying that the aged people has more experience than younger, simply because they spent such a long time to suffer obstacles or difficulties in the past, thanks to all what happened , they gathered and being the best version of themselves. nowadays, myriad companies recruitment the lead of organizations with long term experienced request. Statistics have shown most of renowned constitution has older leadership. Toyota or Microsoft software could be cited as good example.
Secondly, another point that should be taken into serious consideration is that aged leader are overshadowed by the young. Those who are against this may claim that the active, smarted young could be able to lead accounts for the power inside the brain. nowadays, numerous students are study abroad and then come back to contribute by their exotic knowledge, cultural acknowledged from oversea. For following reasons, they reach far general vision, having the profound understandings about cooperated and economic in the world that necessary features of leadership or director. A telling example is Le Dang Khoa, Shark Tank's investor, he was director, start up, cofounder at 25 years old, and the successful business have proved that.
In conclusion, under no circumstances should people recognized that the young or the old is better with high position, every people could able to be the best if they are potential candidates for the thrive of organizations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34602076125 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86506697985 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650519031142 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5129144157 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.846153846 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138558540323 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04885233201 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487592836073 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901916125392 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233388787337 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.