Kingpins have qualities to run the country and industry smoothly because thet can handle every hurdle with their knowledge.However,it has become debatable issue whether grey haired people are proved as good chief or the upcoming generation.Whereas, i fiemlt concur with statement that youth have far more potential to mange the organisation and run the nation in a judiciary way.The reasons behid this are discussed in forthcoming paragraphs
To embark with,there are ample of reasons that why weans are consider as good leader than golden age people.The predominant factor is that they know very well how to use technical gadgets because they are blessed with mechanism skills.Secondly, young captains already have leart all the required qualities of manger during tbeir study such as good listener or speaker,communication,co-operation,sportsmanship and etcetera so chances of problems become less when the commad is held by stripling.For instance,as per the international survey, highly labour turnover recorded in the nation Australia in past year because they were wanted to give the rope to adult commander for
boom the outcome level.
What is more,an adventurous skills can be observed in whippersnappers, due to thet they always try to explore new things for the betterment of organisation.Additionally, as they always be eager to get success for that they try to learn more in brief about each product so that they can gain their knowledge.last but not least, they always follow modern and unbiased thinking instead of orthodox policy, so it would be fruitfull if they handle the nation.a good example for this point is the former chief ministwr of state Uttarpardesh, India, shri Akhilesh yadav was one the young leader who became the minister two time back to back due to honesty, hardwork and integrity.
To conclude with,no doubt "old is gold" but it is also undeniable fact that in present era youngsters can be good leader because of their multitasking abilities and quick learning.Moreover if the future of region is youth so it is judiciary time to hand over the commad to them as soon as possible
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for instance, in brief, no doubt, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3185840708 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.93650052809 2.80592935109 140% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619469026549 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 113.0 20.2975951904 557% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 343.447553816 49.4020404114 695% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 601.0 106.682146367 563% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 113.0 20.7667163134 544% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 42.0 7.06120827912 595% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102160818015 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670423416055 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0218221455528 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.044611186674 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032211027595 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 60.1 13.0946893788 459% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -43.22 50.2224549098 -86% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 47.4 11.3001002004 419% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.76 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.76 8.58950901804 160% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 47.2 10.1190380762 466% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 47.0 10.7795591182 436% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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