Leaders and directors in an organisation are normally older people. Some people think younger leader would be better. Do you agree or disagree?
Leaders and directors in the organizations are usually the elderly. In contrast, some people tend to think the youth would be more appropriate. Nowadays, many people especially young adults, believe that the old people are not able to handle all the works and they should retired. However, it has both pros and cons to do this. In this essay, advantages and disadvantages of this issue will be discussed.
It is certainly obvious, the old people have variety range of experiences at work. Moreover, they can help to others in many different situations. A recent study published by Stanford University indicates more than 72% of people tend to ask their problems to the elderly because they usually give the ideal solution. For instance, in software projects it is so essential to know about software architects and have experience in some extent projects to recognize future problems and handle them. Hence, the organization use older people to manage their projects.
Turning to the other side of the argument, young people should allow to gain experience in this situation. In addition, they are motivated and passion at work and they are usually hard workload. They always utilize new technology and they are brisk to using the Internet. Therefore, perhaps some of them would be suitable for managing.
All in all, in spite of older people have more experience and they are able to manage and direct, the companies should give this chance to the youth. Personally, I have been known many young people who have appropriate knowledge and can lead projects in organizations. So, they should support them to chase their dreams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 120, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...k. Moreover, they can help to others in many different situations. A recent study published by...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in contrast, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07434944238 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69077195761 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553903345725 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.71089293 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2941176471 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147647792451 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550348014286 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604065961228 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980795481487 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686985403724 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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