Globalization has changed our lives in many aspects, especially language. Many schools nowadays take priority in English rather than the relative language. While believing learning English is crucial, I still think people should take action to preserve their mother tongue.
To begin with, English is important for many reasons. It is one of the most common languages, which all international companies' documents must be written in. Therefore, mastering English gives one more opportunity to explore the world or simply have a well-paid job. In developing countries namely Vietnam, Thailand or the Philippines, workers with English certificates tend to be paid as twice as much as others.
On the other hand, the local language should also be taught for cultural preservation. A language is a nation's voice and spirit so keeping it alive is a way to spread patriotism. However, in order to do so, authorities need to have policies that encourage everyone to learn the language. For example, teaching it at schools or organizing local language competitions.
In conclusion, English is an advantageous language to learn but it is the local one that is the spirit of a people. From my viewpoint, integrating into the world while maintaining one's own culture is a challenging problem. Only by solving it, could a nation aim for stable development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26388888889 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01970764467 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662037037037 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7942927474 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.2142857143 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293856636275 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904087233491 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696051139541 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150606138457 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026027873678 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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