Learning english at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages If these are not taught many are are at risk of dying out In your opinions is it important for everyone to learn English Should we try to ensure the survival of local

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Learning english at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are are at risk of dying out. In your opinions, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Many believe that, today english is seen more importanat compare to local languages. However, if local languages are not tauhgt, they can die out. I think, english is the best solution for travels, workers and students. That's why people should learn it, but they must remember about local languages.
In today's world english is key to many problems. To simlify, if local businesses try to be international one, they should find partners from other countries. Sometimes it is very easy, however, if business owners and partners speak in different languages, communication between them will be hard.Although they can use translator, it takes time and money. Moreover, knowing english makes student's life and study unchallenging. There are a huge number of informations in the internet and mainly in english. They can learn new skills online and it seems more convenient and effective. What's more, you can make your travels simply by knowing english. Nowadays, many can speak english and it is the best way of communication. For these reasons, I can say that everyone need to learn english and make their life comfortable.
On the other hand, individuals have to remember about their mother tongue, because they start their live with it. Additionally, that languages shows our differences and identity. If we are in-depth analysis our mother tongue, can find tradition and cultural values. One more is that local languages are heritage from our ancestors and community should protecyt and ensure to survive them. There are a wide range of solution to survive languages. First of all school subjects should be taught in local languages. In addition, adults and old people have to illustrate, how it is importanat to save mother tongue for young generations. As well, all documenets and both formal and informal writing and advertisements must be in local languages. These are a chief solution to protect our mother tongue.
To sum up, our Z generation is bilingual generation which can speak in more than 2 languages fluently and learning other languages like english is importanat aspect of our life, but also we should remember and protect our mother tongue.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, i think, in addition, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15954415954 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79368227908 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541310541311 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7308316096 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7391304348 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2608695652 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305065872199 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890342169199 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604069711089 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195001119469 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584970789702 0.056905535591 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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