Some people think that cultural tradition may be destroyed when they are used as many making attractions aimed at tourists, other believe it is the only way to serve this tradition. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.
It considered that cultural tradition have increasing become popular tourist attraction, which has sparked a debate about weather communalization is tradition is determinant or essential for their preservation. And this essay I will discuss both perspective and present my opinion on the matter.
In today's globalizated world, making cultural tradition key attraction for tourists is trendy. However, this many making attractions can lead to tradition degradation. True Value and meaning of cultural practice can be overshadowed by the focus on profit and reducing them to mere goods or service. This can lead to the erosion of identity and heritage of traditions. To simplify, traditional ceremony can be altered as performance to be visually appealing to tourists' test and exceptions,rather than maintain their original form and significance.
On the flip side, supporters of commercializing cultural tradition as tourist attraction contend that this is a crucial strategy to save them from disappearing. Additionally, showing their tradition is one type of earning money for local people and tourists are main way to get profit. It means, it's profitable and creates more work places.
To sum up, I think tourism is a very crucial sector for government, which can get affordable interest and local traditions are a chief solution to attract them. Because foregion people travel to discover new location and unusual traditions. Moreover, local community makes more profit from selling souvenirs and other gifts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, as to, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56277056277 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17419058056 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640692640693 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3507621328 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8461538462 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305472152557 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104454483645 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667910029043 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176019206084 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417092899362 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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