Learning to manage money is one of the key aspects of adult life How in your view can individuals best learn to manage their money

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Learning to manage money is one of the key aspects of adult life. How in your view can individuals best learn to manage their money?

Nowadays, people often seem to be frustrated and always find it is difficult whenever doing costly purchases because of the condition of low budgets. Moreover, this can lead to a high rate of indebtedness which is a serious problem for individuals. Thus, it is extremely necessary to learn how to manage money and these are two feasible ways to learn according to perspective.
One easy way to absorb this knowledge is from our childhood, especially from the examples of parents. The parents always need to think thoroughly before buying expensive things. they take notes, then save money by credit cards until it is enough Additionally, we ought to observe how they spend on other necessities, how are the quality and quantity of accessories as well as their behavior when making financial decisions. However, it seems that this is not sufficient because parents can make mistakes generally.
Another good way is to study on campus, typically the trade universities, which have been recognized as the first fundamental principles. learning gradually from the basic to the complex, for instance, doing the arithmetics at schools or the discussions about the skills to get bargains also seem to be familiar to adults Indeed, it likes the advantageous internships for them before tackling outside.
To conclude, it is undeniable that people should be in the know of management of their budgets. By experiences, they will not only take it easy for granted but also be very flexible in trading, which will result in the decrease of personal dept primarily as well as put them into a better life standard.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to accord'.
Suggestion: to accord
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Suggestion: They
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Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Learning
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Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, for instance, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07575757576 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8704724401 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632575757576 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3306300146 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.818181818 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188218231533 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628987899796 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855341217639 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101272692283 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544100711834 0.056905535591 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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