Learning to manage money is one of the key aspects ofadult life. How in your view can individuals best learn to manage their money?
In our modern life, best money management play prominent role for becoming opulent. This statement admetted in positive views by more and more individuals. Most people think that they ignore spending money in how amount of this is not cause their regulating money truely.
Firstly, there are not ranked criterias in managinv money in many parts of the world people Actually, it is not educated in family environment even, schools too for instance, if controling money is learned prior to finished school, childern will become best controller in managing budget. However, in spite of knowing to regulate income some people do not pay attention that budget. What I mean by this, they spend more amount of money even, if they obtain some kind of payments. Concequently, they can come accros failure in their life, because of their interests. I mean that it can be seen that several notorious footballists face bankruptcy quickly because of unawere how control money.
Another reason of wasting money without special measures is that advertising has contributed spending money more and more unnecessary products. It can be good example is that there are different kinds of posters in order to involve manufacturers products. As a result, it can lead to people purehasing more likely excessive products. If individuals already have learned on wherever they would ignore something, in other words, may be posters, aduertisements, and other kindis of stocks.
To sum up, individuals should make huge strategy on their money where spending and what spending . On the other hand, people should know value of money, to be more precise, they should know where does come money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, for instance, i mean, kind of, as a result, in other words, in spite of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05185185185 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57031700233 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 270.0 20.2975951904 1330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1364.0 106.682146367 1279% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 270.0 20.7667163134 1300% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 154.0 7.06120827912 2181% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307907989589 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.307907989589 0.084324248473 365% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193496153026 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659218951337 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 137.4 13.0946893788 1049% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -202.57 50.2224549098 -403% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 108.6 11.3001002004 961% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.49 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.6 8.58950901804 240% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 110.0 10.1190380762 1087% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 10.7795591182 520% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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