Leo Buscaglia, a famous author, who was known as “Dr.Love”, once said: “A life lived in love will never be dull”. Every individual on this planet has their right to live and to love, however, loving in college or at school age has still been a controversial topic. In my opinion, having a romantic relationship in college is completely appropriate and should be normalized among Young people.
It has been widely agreed that college life is incredibly stressful and can get extremely hard sometimes. Young people may find it’s quite exhausting and frustrating if they are put into that situation and have to manage everything on their own. Having a romantic partner by themselves not only can reduce their anxiety as well as their pressure, but also allow them to feel emotionally supported whenever they need. Falling in love in college also teaches Young folks to be more caring and less selfishing, which will result in a better version of them later on.
The second reason that makes falling in love in college a wonderful idea is because it gives students chances to share many of their absolute best memories with each other. It has already been stated that YOUR college years are some of the greatest years in one’s life. Many marvelous and significant milestones will appear in this period of time. It can be their first time receiving a scholarship, their first time getting a job, or even their first house. With a college lover, adolescents can get to share those memorable achievements and reflect back on them together.
While having a romantic relationship in college seems to be a glorious experience, there are still a few suspicions about this matter. Some people may not emotionally mature, they fall in love too easily and then immediately fall out of love. This issue can be extremely time-wasting and usually negatively affect students’ emotions, which leads to bad habits like staying up late, using drugs, or more serious consequences such as depression and eating disorders.
In conclusion, falling in love in college is suitable, unforgettable and can even get spectacular if they have the right person with them. Love is one of the most beautiful things in this world and Youngsters should be free to love whenever they want
Leo Buscaglia, a famous author, who was known as “Dr.Love”, once said: “A life lived in love will never be dull”. Every individual on this planet has their right to live and to love, however, loving in college or at school age has still been a controversial topic. In my opinion, having a romantic relationship in college is completely appropriate and should be normalized among Young people.
It has been widely agreed that college life is incredibly stressful and can get extremely hard sometimes. Young people may find it’s quite exhausting and frustrating if they are put into that situation and have to manage everything on their own. Having a romantic partner by themselves not only can reduce their anxiety as well as their pressure, but also allow them to feel emotionally supported whenever they need. Falling in love in college also teaches Young folks to be more caring and less selfishing, which will result in a better version of them later on.
The second reason that makes falling in love in college a wonderful idea is because it gives students chances to share many of their absolute best memories with each other. It has already been stated that YOUR college years are some of the greatest years in one’s life. Many marvelous and significant milestones will appear in this period of time. It can be their first time receiving a scholarship, their first time getting a job, or even their first house. With a college lover, adolescents can get to share those memorable achievements and reflect back on them together.
While having a romantic relationship in college seems to be a glorious experience, there are still a few suspicions about this matter. Some people may not emotionally mature, they fall in love too easily and then immediately fall out of love. This issue can be extremely time-wasting and usually negatively affect students’ emotions, which leads to bad habits like staying up late, using drugs, or more serious consequences such as depression and eating disorders.
In conclusion, falling in love in college is suitable, unforgettable and can even get spectacular if they have the right person with them. Love is one of the most beautiful things in this world and Youngsters should be free to love whenever they want
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Love
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'absolute the best'.
Suggestion: absolute the best
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...nificant milestones will appear in this period of time. It can be their first time receiving a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hould be free to love whenever they want
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, then, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01319261214 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74152764923 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575197889182 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3396072527 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.764705882 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2941176471 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45092262296 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148518118994 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.197591792367 0.0667982634062 296% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28259652392 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.258977449039 0.056905535591 455% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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