Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.
All over the world, the rate at which juveniles get caught up in crime is on the increase. this essay will analyse the reasons and proffer solutions.
To begin, the level of crime seems to be on the highest rate in most cities the reason for this can be argued to be lack of parental supervision. For instance, most children are a product of broken home due to divorce. Mothers are left with sole responsibilities of looking after their offsprings resulting in working long hours to make ends meet without adequate care for their children. Boys caught up in this kind of situation, tend to behave irrationally because of lack of father figure in their lives. they get involved in inappropriate acts such as drug dealing, joining gangs and this leads to committing crime. Also, boredom is thought to be another contributory factor to getting involved in crime. In my area, teenagers are known to roam the streets because they do not have things to keep them occupied. As a result of this, they end up in the hands of wrong people who introduce them to unruly behaviour.
However, the government can help combat unsocial behaviours by funding youth centres and use workers who will teach youngsters how to stay off crime by engaging them in activities like sports, seminars on cookery or career talk. By doing this, they will feel loved and likewise have places to go expend their energy and to do productive things with their time which will in turn better their lives. Additionally, uncles can play the role of a father in the lives of the male children to wade them off becoming irresponsible adults. this will therefore, go to a great length in reducing crime rate in youth.
In Conclusion, there is no doubt that the level of crime committed by young adults are on the rise in most cities of the world. this essay have outlined the reasons and suggested some solutions, if these can be put into consideration the rate of juvenile crime will be diminished.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, look, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73760932945 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60727153078 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6082720108 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5625 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262702838992 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869104731327 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740322193635 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180416011147 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824823899231 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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