In the last decade's amount of crime done by youngsters is rising in a plethora of cities and this issue concerns not only a few countries it becomes a huge problem for the rest of the world. This essay will examine the main causes of this issue and a possible solution to tackle it.
First of all, the primary cause of this problem is the lack of effective control parents to own son. These days parents spending their precious time on work while their kids staying without caregivers. Secondly, the main cause of this issue is mass media which makes a contribution to this. Multiple detrimental news considerable contribute to rising crime. Thus, according to USA statistics investigating search about the cause of youth crime, they found that excessive adverse news considerably impacts children to negative acts.
However, despite the severe problems, there many ways to tackle this problem. Some possible solution for this implementing large -scale program which reduce working time for parents who have many kids. Moreover, the nest step fighting with a crime is to control mass media news, which remains the main cause of crime, so that kids crime will decline.
To sum up, several factors have led to an increase in youth crime, but measures are available to solve this problem.By using this solution we can prevent inevitable consequences which mold in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: parent
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01746724891 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53872206875 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624454148472 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4099781513 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.454545455 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206846097417 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768797726707 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447057211724 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133617002507 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281234397474 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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