Life in many cities around the world is becoming so expensive that one day only rich people will be able to live there.
What are the causes of this situation? What measures could be taken to solve problem?
Due to the many facilities it proffers, metro cities are becoming the point of attraction to the public. However, accommodation in big towns getting costly day by day and soon only wealthy persons can live there. It has several reasons behind it that can be solved by a few measures.
The major reason why people migrate to big towns is that they find more opportunities there. Such cities have a very vast commercial sector with well-established businesses, which provides a lot of job opportunities that can also be helpful for one to live a prestigious life. The increase in population creates a large requirement of land for houses, which creates an extreme increase in pricing of land.
Furthermore, it provides better provisions that cannot be availed in small towns. Schools are found to be well-developed in city areas rather than villages, and, they offer a variety of courses that may not be available in remote areas that attract students towards urban areas. Since the population will grow up in such area, the demand for daily essentials such as food and clothes will also rise.
To overcome these situations, some steps should be taken by the government. Firstly, the government should encourage people to migrate towards rural areas by supplying there the same facilities as big cities have. Moreover, the state government should welcome huge industries in remote locations to create job opportunities. Also, the state authorities should start schools in small towns with new and enhanced courses.
To sum up, it is certain that cities are becoming well-liked, meanwhile, getting expensive day by day, though, the situation can be controlled by the efforts of the government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...the same facilities as big cities have. Moreover to this, the state government should we...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: huge
...is, the state government should welcome huge huge industries in remote locations to creat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, of course, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14695340502 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87041506411 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584229390681 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8745365482 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.571428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232310797156 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741645087512 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499836491701 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130323753128 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495188017762 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.