Life now is better than 100 years ago.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Life is thought to be much improved from that of a 100 years ago. There are people who would agree or disagree with the statement. We shall discuss both the pros and cons and shall then try to conclude with the best suggestion.
Life has various stages to be discussed in detail in order to compare the changes occurred with the time. Certain people believe that there are not much changes in life from that of 100 years ago. For example, people have to go for work for their bread and butter, till today. There are some diseases that can't be cured as if it was the same as in 19th century. Finally, nowadays we can see people who lacks their basic needs like food and shelter.
However, the other kind of thought is that hundred years ago though, man has to put all his efforts to make life better, he had succeeded to make life simpler and better to an extent. For example, proper transportation like train was just at the verge of beginning. Poverty was another disaster in early 19th century. There were large number of members in a family and it was partly because of the high infant mortality. Even younger children below the age of 10 years of old were sent for work. The education system wasn't well organized, and most of the people were illiterate. The health care system was not in the reach of the poor and was not much advanced to deal the complicated cases. But nowadays human have advanced in most of the fields and had made life much comfortable. We are able to reach a destination within a limited time. Man has made so much implementation to eradicate the poverty by providing priority and subsidies to the poor. Today healthcare system has achieved the most modern technologies and techniques in helping to diagnose and treating the patients. Nowadays, we have got many machines helping us in most of our routine house work.
In my opinion, the life has changed a lot from that of 100 years ago. Now it's much simpler and easier with many of the inventions helping in our daily living. So I totally agree to the statement that life now is better than 100 years ago.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...rtain people believe that there are not much changes in life from that of 100 years ...
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Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ill today. There are some diseases that cant be cured as if it was the same as in 19...
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Line 5, column 518, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...ere sent for work. The education system wasnt well organized, and most of the people ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'kind of', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226277372263 0.247107183377 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.170316301703 0.155533422707 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0875912408759 0.0946595960268 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0559610705596 0.0501214627716 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0389294403893 0.0437548338989 89% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133819951338 0.122226691241 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0462287104623 0.0403226058552 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.36514446604 2.80594681477 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.036496350365 0.0326793684256 112% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0875912408759 0.0861772015684 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00973236009732 0.021408717616 45% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00729927007299 0.011925033212 61% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2088.0 1933.35771543 108% => OK
No of words: 378.0 316.048096192 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52380952381 6.12580529183 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.272486772487 0.374742101984 73% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.208994708995 0.28420135186 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.126984126984 0.203846283523 62% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0634920634921 0.137316102897 46% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.36514446604 2.80594681477 84% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.037074148 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.56093040696 92% => OK
Word variations: 56.5453682399 60.7387585426 93% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0891783567 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.4347826087 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8843353242 49.517814964 54% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7826086957 127.492653851 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4347826087 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.478260869565 0.814263465372 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 37.3342535082 49.1944974215 76% => OK
Elegance: 1.53211009174 1.69124875643 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258353263138 0.332605444948 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0796249731621 0.102741220458 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0615068503169 0.0668466124924 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.448516939487 0.534860350844 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.133733733965 0.148594505496 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983669626594 0.134430193775 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792702461164 0.0742795772207 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.39291106745 0.324371583561 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.04187872284 0.0638462369009 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218653331894 0.228012699653 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678127256194 0.058150111329 117% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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